News Hook Key To Placements In Horizontal Press
The Business to Business Marketer (November-December 1998)

By Jack E. Appleman, CBC, President, SG Communications

While most trade magazines willingly publish press releases, features and technical articles about your company's products with minor edits, the horizontal press is far more selective about what qualifies as "news."  This holds true for publications ranging from the Wall Street Journal to daily newspapers to regional business journals.

To get quotes or bylined articles in these periodicals, you need to shift your focus away from embellishing your company's products and services and toward developing newsworthy issues.

Step out of your industry's paradigm and figure out what might intrigue a broader-based audience.  It could be the potential impact of proposed government regulations, an analysis of a recently released survey, or a significant trend forecasted by one of your top executives.  In some cases, news hooks can be timed to coincide with theme issues planned for upcoming editions.

There may be instances when a major achievement by your company constitutes news, provided its importance reaches well beyond your corporate walls.  When you think you've got the story angle, put yourself in the place of the writer and ask yourself:  Will this interest the reader?

If the story angle passes your news test, the next step is framing the issue through a well-conceived pitch letter, a concise one-to two-page story proposal.  This letter, which also serves as "speech notes" for pitching over the phone, should comprise the following:

1. The opening:  What's the headline and lead?

Visualize the headline and lead for the article you're suggesting.  Then convey it in the first sentence.  For example:  Recent OSHA crackdowns could cost suppliers millions in fines and shake up the industry.  Then, if necessary, use one or two more sentences to further explain the issue.

To gain some insight on how to write succinct headlines and leads, thumb through a daily newspaper and see the approaches used by the pros.  Remember, many journalists will only read the first paragraph unless the idea moves them to finish the letter.

2. Credentials of spokesperson and company

Explain why your firm's executive qualifies as a source to comment on this issue or write a by-lined article.  Then summarize your company and its distinguishing characteristics.  If necessary, go back to the positioning statement from the most recent marketing plan.

Be sure to explicitly ask for what you want with a statement such as. "I'd like to suggest an interview with…."  It's just as important as asking for the sale or a callback in a direct mail letter.

3. Key points & other story angles

Suggest three to five topics that your spokesperson could address, including specific points related to the proposed angle and additional story ideas.  Sometimes, what you thought was your second or third best story angle turns out to be one the writer decides to pursue.

4. Offer assistance

The letter should close with your offer not only to arrange an interview with your company's spokesperson, but to research information and help facilitate interviews with spokespersons from other corporations or trade associations who could provide different perspectives.  In essence, you should volunteer to become an editorial research assistant for that story.

This step will improve your chances of securing a placement and becoming that journalist's source for future stories.  On several occasions, I've helped reporters track down spokespersons for articles that didn't apply to my client.  Busy writers appreciate that kind of effort and will remembers their "sources"  the next time they need a quote.

5. Background materials

With the pitch letter, include the following:

  • A one-page biographical profile on spokesperson(s).
  • If available, a trade article with your spokesperson's by-line (which helps qualify him or her as a bona fide source).
  • Background on the issue.
  • Background on your company.  (Journalists prefer one- to two-page fact sheets over glitzy four-color brochures).
  • Photos, if pertinent.

In a perfect world, the editor or writer loves the story angle and immediately calls to arrange an interview or request a by-liner.  Don't count on it.  Wait a week or two and call.  Never open with, "Did you get my letter?"  (a sure turn-off to time-pressed journalists).  Just start proposing the idea as expressed in the first sentence of the pitch letter, but make sure you get the point across in 30 to 45 seconds.

When you need a quick reaction to your idea, call before sending the letter, but draft at least the first paragraph as an outline for your oral pitch.

If the writer likes the story angle but wants more information, find out as much as you can about how he or she intends to approach the article.  Then you can better shape the pitch letter.

If your idea gets turned down, don't give up if you firmly believe you have a legitimate story.  Call back a few weeks later, armed with new twists that could push your story angle over the top.  These could include tie-ins to an upcoming event, a new industry study, or a suggestion to write a follow-up to a recently published article.

Placements in horizontal publications generally require more time and more in-depth thinking than trade articles.  But the rewards can, in many respects, be far greater – including greater visibility and credibility that spans numerous audiences.

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